Opinion for a Mighty Atom story?

[Toshio Tenma]

"It's Uran's birthday and she visit a filming set where lives a old horse
used for movies called "Pegasus", however the horse is dying out of
old age and is set to be sacrified.
Uran protests the idea of sacrifying him and convinces it's owner
that despite dying of old age he still have the right to cheerish
his last moments.
Meanwhile, Atom reveals that his biggest fear is losing Uran, since
she is his only one sibling.
Learning of this, Skunk sets a trap and trick a boy into giving a
bracelet to Uran, however, the bracelet have a bomb which is
set to explode if she get close to Atom or tell something about it.
Uran overheard the conversation and runs away from Atom who is
shocked that she don't want him to get near her.
Uran has runned way too much that her energy ends nearly depleted and
with much effort she removes the bracelet, but don't have enough
energy to run since the bomb is set to explode upon removed.
By surprise, Pegasus catch the bracelet and runs away from Uran
despite her pleas..."